The next shouldn’t be an important facet of the tragic homicide of Brian Thompson, the CEO of UnitedHealthcare. Nevertheless it does illustrate how utilizing the right phrases and being aware of figures of speech assist keep away from confusion.
Technically, a firearm cartridge is manufactured from (1) a casing, which holds gunpowder and a primer to ignite the latter, and (2) a bullet, which is a projectile fitted on the finish of the casing. A bullet is thus a part of a cartridge however it isn’t the identical factor. Now, a determine of speech known as synecdoche consists in utilizing an element to signify a complete (or generally the entire to signify an element) like “boots on the bottom” to talk of troopers on the bottom. Folks, particularly these not conversant in firearms, could also be repeating a synecdoche by saying “bullet” to signify the entire “cartridge,” like Mr. Jourdain was doing prose with out realizing it; or they’re simply confused. Even dictionaries are sometimes not clear. When utilizing this determine of speech, one should perceive, and make sure his reader understands, that the boots are usually not marching by themselves and that the cartridge doesn’t go away the gun via the barrel at (or near) the pace of sound because the bullet does.
A Wall Road Journal story (“Police Zero In on New York Hostel in Hunt for UnitedHealth Shooter,” December 5, 2024), signed by three journalists, talked about that the killer of Mr. Thompson had
used a Sharpie to go away coded messages … on bullets that got here out of his gun when it jammed, the [law-enforcement] official stated.
This sentence is a case of taking a synedoche actually. How might the killer write on the bullets when there may be not a lot house on a 9mm (diameter) bullet? If the killer had managed this unattainable process, how might have his messages been deciphered after the deformed or fragmented bullets had been fired (“got here out of his gun”) and recovered, most likely embedded in some object? Or had been bullets separated from the casings when the shooter cleared a jam? That’s additionally unattainable. Or is it that the killer extra realistically wrote on the casing a part of his cartridges? Simply yesterday, the newspaper repeated its complicated assertion, however dropped the jamming half (“Individual of Curiosity in Killing of UnitedHealthcare Government in Custody in Pennsylvania,” Wall Road Journal, December 9, 2024, up to date 12:31 pm ET).
The journalists had been talking not of bullets however of casings, that are ejected via the ejection port of the pistol slide after every firing (and presumably of 1 casing nonetheless half of an entire cartridge that might have been ejected via the journal properly when a jam was cleared). The police would have discovered all these on the bottom the place the shooter stood when firing. In fact, the confusion might have originated from the regulation enforcement supply, however these individuals have often seen a pistol in motion. It isn’t unattainable that the regulation enforcement official felt he wanted to dumb it down for the journalist, who ought to then have objected and requested clarifying questions.
The unique story in Monetary Occasions was considerably much less obscure (“New York Police Examine Bullet Casing Inscriptions in Killing of Insurance coverage Government,” December 5, 2024):
Detectives in New York are investigating inscriptions of “deny”, “defend” and “depose” on bullet casings left on the scene of the homicide … in accordance with an individual conversant in the case.
The FT a minimum of distinguished the casings from the “bullets,” even when it used the complicated synecdoche as if the casing had been a part of the bullet as a substitute of being a part of the cartridge. If the casing is actually a part of the bullet, then the bullet is a part of the bullet.
One might say that each one this doesn’t matter a lot. But, it could not have been extra difficult to make use of the right phrases and keep away from any confusion. By the way, a Monetary Occasions story of yesterday talked about that the suspect’s pistol was a home-made (“ghost”) gun, which might clarify why it jammed (“US Police Detain ‘Individual of Curiosity’ in UnitedHealth Government’s Homicide,” December 9, 2024). Prime industrial semi-automatic firearms do jam, however not usually.
Encouraging breaking information: In at this time’s early morning story on the suspect’s arrest, the Wall Road Journal used the phrase “spherical,” an alternate however appropriate title for a cartridge. If the journalists proceed to enhance, we might pardon their later incomprehensible “bullet cartridge” (like a “boot soldier”) by which they meant “casing.” I hope they purchase pistols and go capturing.
Typically, a synecdoche is extra treacherous and consequential. Saying “america” (or “France” or no matter nation’s title) “did this or thinks that” to check with the federal government of america confuses the bullet (the federal government) with the entire cartridge (the nation), as if the federal government had been similar to the nation. In political-speak and social evaluation, synecdoche is harmful, maybe greater than metaphor or hyperbole. These figures of speech can conceal confusion or propaganda.
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A cartridge is manufactured from a casing (and its inside parts) and a bullet